Essay review

I was happy my thesis worked out well because I worked hard on that. However, I was disappointed with my supporting parts of the essay. My first body should have started with a clear topic from the start then use quotes to supply evidence to my point. I could have used one stronger quote to really get my point across. I should have taken more time with my title. It could have helped make my point even further. My body paragraphs had too much of my writing and making claims rather than using quotes to support then analyze my ideas. I should have organized my ideas better, meaning start one idea and completely cover it before moving on to the next one.  I think my essay was also a bit to general and I needed to focus on one specific point and use points to express my thinking behind my ideas.